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These feelings, they gather inside,
Like tiny lockets, full of secrets,
A never ending twist of emotions,
Swirling, devouring.
Like knives, they pierce this icy heart,
Until cracks begin to show,
But once again,
Like a deathly veil,
The cracks are covered,
With black frost,
The blades still embedded,
Forever lost within.
You look into my heart,
You see nothing,
But the harsh winters of this world.
©2007-2009 ~GiniroKitsune
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Submitted: April 24, 2007
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I was bored so i thought id write a poem, i call it an 'Emoti-Poem', lol. Its not brilliant, but i think its expresses the theme quite well. (ive left you to work out the theme, lol). Comments?
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thats good peom ^^
am touched..lol ;p

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This blade it feels so cold, baby hold me while, I'm shaking,
This knife has pierced my soul, I sit alone while, I'm shaking,
And yes I'll laugh out loud, with blind eyes I'm shaking...
thanks=D, ur the first=D

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:blackrose:She watches the Sunset:blackrose:
:blackrose:A single black tear escapes her eye:blackrose:
:blackrose:A single black rose forms upon her cheek:blackrose:
lol..i noticed that ^^ ;p

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This blade it feels so cold, baby hold me while, I'm shaking,
This knife has pierced my soul, I sit alone while, I'm shaking,
And yes I'll laugh out loud, with blind eyes I'm shaking...

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